Our video choice; Paramore-Conspiracy

Tuesday 24 November 2009

Advert rough cut feedback

We asked a few people within our class to give us some feedback on our advert rough cut to see what improvements we could make. This was the feedback we were given:

Good points:
• The rose looks effective and bold
• The colours work well and reflect the video
• Simple and effective

Bad points:
• No showing of CD or DVD cover therefore not promoting the product well enough.
• Not enough information on the page
• Slightly empty page

As a group we then decided we needed some change to make our advert as good as possible. We decided the page was slightly plain and we needed more information to promote the product well so we decided to add in an image of our DVD and CD cover which showed the band and promoted the product. We decided to keep the rose the same because it was liked by our target audience and we liked the idea of a clear motif which is shown throughout the advert and video.

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